Twist:
The tune of "Ode to Joy," the final movement of Beethoven's Ninth Symphony, has been ingrained into my memory over the years. As if a pianist played the piece on the back of my head and created an inextinguishable melody in the resonance chamber of my skull, the ringtone of my phone came to life and filled the room.
Realizing that I had been staring aimlessly at the ringing telephone, I pick up the outdated home phone from its base and hold it to my ear.
"Hello! Good morning!"
I hear the heavily-accented male voice explode from the speaker's end of the phone.
On the other end of the line is my Malay-speaking cousin from Kuala Lumpur, who knows no English.
Descriptive:
Formality. Tension. Like a ticking time bomb, all the leaders of the world sit inside a sealed building. The doors locked tight. Not a single soul exists inside the confines of the solid walls besides the most powerful people in the world. Unlike other monumental summits, translators aren't needed. No, President Obama hasn't learned a couple the hundred languages for all the people in the world, but in every prominent figures' ear is an earphone with a tiny chip that translates the spoken languages into each individual's language of preference.
Narrative:
In the year of 2004, Stephen Theby faced a marketing problem. He had to distribute a product into 26 different languages around the world as soon as possible for the maximum marketing profit. Under normal circumstances, this job would take up to a year, and consumer waiting for a separate version of the product would always be a year behind, but Steve Theby had an idea that may change the course of world-wide lifestyles in addition to marketing advancements.
As of now, I'm going with my second lead. From peer feedback, people liked it the best. I will go back later, because I think there are words and descriptions that I can fix which would strengthen the mood of the lead. I also want to fix the first lead, because feedback proved that it confused readers and I think that it has the strongest content. (ode to joy is the ringtone of my phone, but I didn't want to start with the typical
onomatopoeia! The phone rang.)